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Before I tell you about my idea, for those of you who are fond of the original idea of Breakout Stars, please DO NOT go apeshit about this idea I'm sharing. It doesn't mean I'm throwing away the original idea of the story. I'm just showing a suggestion which may or may not spark your interest.

Ok, here's an idea for an "alternate" version of the Breakout Stars story (And as I said before, I'm NOT getting rid of the original story)....

The story is basically the same with the protagonist Artie ending up in the universe of his cartoon show. Only in this version, the show is about Captain Dumaas in his many adventures with Madelyn and Rip-TIle trying to catch him and bring him to Overloard Ominous, only to fail in a comical manner. Surprisingly, the audience who watch the show is so tired of Dumaas winning accidentally at the expense of Madelyn and Rip-Tile to the point of rooting for the two henchmen (Due to their "Never give up" attitudes and making people laugh and sympathise) in spite of the Dumaas character being overhyped by the studio.

Once Artie ends up in the other universe, he ends up captured by Madelyn and Rip-Tile and his magic pencil is taken by Ominous' troops until circumstances lead to the three having to work together. After encountering some obsticles and being forced to save people in their own way by Artie's insistence and assistance, the young cartoonist begins to see promise in the two, not just for their comic act and ability to overcome obsticles despite constantly losing to the show's appointed "Hero." Meanwhile, Dumaas begins to notice that the people are taking a liking to the two henchmen and begins to suspect them and won't have them stealing his thunder, and goes off to sabotage their efforts only to fail the same way he caused Madelyn and Rip-tile to do for years. During the group's journey, Madelyn begins to secretly develop feelings for Artie since he's the first being who isn't afraid of her and his partner Rip-tile and is able to understand and befriend them. Madelyn couldn't let her emotions get in the way of her job and she and Rip-tile had to take their "prisoner" to Ominous so that they can regain their master's respect. So Madelyn lies through her teeth and tells Artie that they promise to get Artie's Pencil back in order to get him home when they get to Ominous' base.

Ominous discovers how the magic pencil works and plans to use it to take over Artie's dimension. Once the three make it to Ominous' fortress, Madelyn and Rip-til break their promise to Artie and hand him over to their evil overlord. But instead of congatulating his henchmen, Ominous fires them since he now has the power of Artie's pencil to aid him which renders the henchmen redundant. The three are locked up in Ominous' dungeon, and Artie is still mad at Madelyn and Rip-tile for breaking their promise. They manage to escape, and Artie alone goes to confront Ominous in an attempt to get his pencil back. Just when things didn't look good for Artie, Madelyn and Rip-tile heroically return with reinforcements. Then after a climatic battle, Artie willingly shares the spotlight with the two former henchmen now heroes. It was then that Madelyn acts emotionally and displays her affection for Artie, with Artie retiring the favour before a heartfelt goodbye as he uses the pencil to transport back home. Dumaas eventully catches up and apprehends the two new heroes cause distain from everyone, including his own organisation. After a angry breakdown by Dumaas, Madelyn and Rip-Tile knock him out for all the years of pain and slapstick.

After returning, Artie pitches his new idea to the studio, leading to a new show about Madelyn and Riptile as the Galexy's anti heroes. And in the meantime, Artie still joins the hilarious duo in their adventures while thwarting their old employer Ominous and other new villains as well as further embarrassing a discraced Dumaas.



So anyway, That's my alternate idea for the story. Tell me what you make of it? I'll be more than happy to continue with the original story if this isn't to anyone's liking. But I feel that this could be a good villain to hero story since the movie, Megamind.
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Captain Dumaas Model Update by BreakoutKid
Captain Dumaas Model Update
Here's glory hound Captain Dumaas in his latest design update.

Captain Dumaas belongs to BreakoutKid (me)
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Dumaas Doodles by BreakoutKid
Dumaas Doodles
Some little drawings of the pimple in the ass of the Breakout Stars, the ever cocky Captain Dumaas being his Dumaas self. Plus a little height comparison drawing between him, Delta and Artie.

Captain Dumaas belong to BreakoutKid (me)
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Happy Halloween from Artie and Delta by BreakoutKid
Happy Halloween from Artie and Delta
Here we have Breakout Stars Protagonists Artie and Delta getting into the Halloween mood, With Artie dressed up as Hiccup from How to Train Your Dragon 2 and Delta Dressed up as Black Widow of Marvel's Avengers.

Artie Bradfield and Delta Lyle belong to Breakout Kid (me)
Hiccup belongs to Dreamworks
Black Widow belongs to Marvel
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An Ominous Duo by BreakoutKid
An Ominous Duo
You've seen Professor Fate and Max, Dick Dastardly and Muttley, Pamela Bondani and Professor Molo, Rocksteady and Bebop, Boris Badenov and Natasha Fatale. Now heres a new generation of hilariously dangerous pair of double dealing do-badders henchmen of the Breakout Stars arch nemesis, Evil Overlord Ominous.

Madelyn and Rip-Tile belong to BreakoutKid (Me)
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Before I tell you about my idea, for those of you who are fond of the original idea of Breakout Stars, please DO NOT go apeshit about this idea I'm sharing. It doesn't mean I'm throwing away the original idea of the story. I'm just showing a suggestion which may or may not spark your interest.

Ok, here's an idea for an "alternate" version of the Breakout Stars story (And as I said before, I'm NOT getting rid of the original story)....

The story is basically the same with the protagonist Artie ending up in the universe of his cartoon show. Only in this version, the show is about Captain Dumaas in his many adventures with Madelyn and Rip-TIle trying to catch him and bring him to Overloard Ominous, only to fail in a comical manner. Surprisingly, the audience who watch the show is so tired of Dumaas winning accidentally at the expense of Madelyn and Rip-Tile to the point of rooting for the two henchmen (Due to their "Never give up" attitudes and making people laugh and sympathise) in spite of the Dumaas character being overhyped by the studio.

Once Artie ends up in the other universe, he ends up captured by Madelyn and Rip-Tile and his magic pencil is taken by Ominous' troops until circumstances lead to the three having to work together. After encountering some obsticles and being forced to save people in their own way by Artie's insistence and assistance, the young cartoonist begins to see promise in the two, not just for their comic act and ability to overcome obsticles despite constantly losing to the show's appointed "Hero." Meanwhile, Dumaas begins to notice that the people are taking a liking to the two henchmen and begins to suspect them and won't have them stealing his thunder, and goes off to sabotage their efforts only to fail the same way he caused Madelyn and Rip-tile to do for years. During the group's journey, Madelyn begins to secretly develop feelings for Artie since he's the first being who isn't afraid of her and his partner Rip-tile and is able to understand and befriend them. Madelyn couldn't let her emotions get in the way of her job and she and Rip-tile had to take their "prisoner" to Ominous so that they can regain their master's respect. So Madelyn lies through her teeth and tells Artie that they promise to get Artie's Pencil back in order to get him home when they get to Ominous' base.

Ominous discovers how the magic pencil works and plans to use it to take over Artie's dimension. Once the three make it to Ominous' fortress, Madelyn and Rip-til break their promise to Artie and hand him over to their evil overlord. But instead of congatulating his henchmen, Ominous fires them since he now has the power of Artie's pencil to aid him which renders the henchmen redundant. The three are locked up in Ominous' dungeon, and Artie is still mad at Madelyn and Rip-tile for breaking their promise. They manage to escape, and Artie alone goes to confront Ominous in an attempt to get his pencil back. Just when things didn't look good for Artie, Madelyn and Rip-tile heroically return with reinforcements. Then after a climatic battle, Artie willingly shares the spotlight with the two former henchmen now heroes. It was then that Madelyn acts emotionally and displays her affection for Artie, with Artie retiring the favour before a heartfelt goodbye as he uses the pencil to transport back home. Dumaas eventully catches up and apprehends the two new heroes cause distain from everyone, including his own organisation. After a angry breakdown by Dumaas, Madelyn and Rip-Tile knock him out for all the years of pain and slapstick.

After returning, Artie pitches his new idea to the studio, leading to a new show about Madelyn and Riptile as the Galexy's anti heroes. And in the meantime, Artie still joins the hilarious duo in their adventures while thwarting their old employer Ominous and other new villains as well as further embarrassing a discraced Dumaas.



So anyway, That's my alternate idea for the story. Tell me what you make of it? I'll be more than happy to continue with the original story if this isn't to anyone's liking. But I feel that this could be a good villain to hero story since the movie, Megamind.
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Kevin Ferguson
Artist | Student | Traditional Art
United Kingdom
Hi, I'm Kevin Ferguson. I'm an ordinary guy from Scotland with a huge fascination with the animation and film industry. I also have an interest in graphic novels.

Basically My dream is to become a professional cartoonist like my idols Butch Hartman, Genndy Tartakovsky, Craig McCracken and Lauren Faust. I would also like to one day create my own graphic novels sometime in the future while on DA.

My Favourite Cartoon Characters include;

Kitty Katswell (TUFF Puppy)
Marty McFly and Doc Brown (BTTF animated series)
Ace Hart (Dog City)
Earthworm Jim (Animated series)
Brandy Harrington (Brandy and Mr Whiskers)
Candace Flynn (Phineas and Ferb)
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:iconbero3000:
bero3000 Featured By Owner 10 hours ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks for the fav
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TheDogwhitaTail Featured By Owner 10 hours ago  Student Traditional Artist
So kev saw the new steven universe?
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:iconbreakoutkid:
BreakoutKid Featured By Owner 10 hours ago  Student Traditional Artist
Aye I have. And I must say, that Ronaldo Fryman is one weird dude.
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TheDogwhitaTail Featured By Owner 10 hours ago  Student Traditional Artist
I know right?

I can believe steven actually made the gems safe him from that guy,just beacuse he wanted him to be weird again!
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BreakoutKid Featured By Owner 10 hours ago  Student Traditional Artist
Well, Steven is quite the nincompoop.
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TheDogwhitaTail Featured By Owner 16 hours ago  Student Traditional Artist
Happy Halloween kev! ^^
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BreakoutKid Featured By Owner 16 hours ago  Student Traditional Artist
Ditto!
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TheDogwhitaTail Featured By Owner 13 hours ago  Student Traditional Artist
:D
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PUFFINSTUDIOS Featured By Owner 19 hours ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ROAD ROVERS HALLOWEEN SPECIAL by PUFFINSTUDIOS  
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TheDogwhitaTail Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Traditional Artist
Hey kev. ^^
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BreakoutKid Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Traditional Artist
Hi Rick. :)
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TheDogwhitaTail Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Traditional Artist
Sup?

Well someone's happy! :D
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:iconbreakoutkid:
BreakoutKid Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Traditional Artist
Well, my birthday's just one week away for one.

You?
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TUFFAgentShepherd Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Artist
Poor Twilight: fav.me/d84ixxm :(
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BreakoutKid Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Traditional Artist
I know, it's not easy being the only sane character.
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TUFFAgentShepherd Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Artist
Yeah.

But, at least Twilight's friends have some logic behind their insanity, instead of Kitty's "friends."
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BreakoutKid Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Traditional Artist
True.
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jokerfake Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist
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Thanks for the +fav on Marge, the Swan 4
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TUFFAgentShepherd Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Artist
Hey, Kev! Remember this? www.youtube.com/watch?v=jW5n3k…

Well, I've made a pic based on it: fav.me/d800h44 ;)
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BreakoutKid Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Traditional Artist
Oh Aye, I remember that. It's enough to make a grown man cry. happycry rvmp 

And yeah, the picture's nice too.
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TUFFAgentShepherd Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Artist
Yeah, it sure does.

Thanks. ^^
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bigfootRULES Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Student Writer
hey kev. what if Delta and Artie went into Dumaas's  sub conscience and they saw this?
youtu.be/G_cetw8Ma2A?t=8m50s 
 
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BreakoutKid Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Student Traditional Artist
That was....awkward. ^^;
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