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February 12


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Ok. Here's some rough details on some of the characters

Artie Bradfield - A young disgruntled cartoonist who is forced by his bosses to make a sci fi slapstick show about Captain Dumaas instead of a sci fi action show about his favourite and more appealing creation, Delta Lyle. He ends up in the universe of his own cartoon, and gets the chance to make things right for Delta and her cadet friends.

Delta Lyle - A female Thy-lupus (a cross between a Tasmanian Tiger and a wolf)  space patroller and The sane female sidekick to Space Captain Dumaas. Delta is generally easy going, but is always serious in action. unfortunately, due to DUmaas' idiocy, she always ends up in harms way while Dumaas gets the credit. That is until she meets Artie, who offers to help her become a true heroine in exchange for a way back home.

Tecki - The eccentric alien girl genius with a soft spot for techno music. Befor joining the space patrol nut, she and her robot guardian, Sass-E travelled the galaxy trying to make a living after her scientist parents died.

Sass-E -Tecki's cynical but faithful fembot assistant and guardian.

Slique - The brash, womanising, witty smooth talker of the space patrol unit. Before joining the Space Patrol unit, he made a living by being con artist.

Rian - The rough and tough gunman of the unit. But his horned face and immovable physique can cover up his gentle giant personality.

Captain Dumaas - The star of Artie's Cartoon show and captain of the Space patrol unit. This diminutive egomaniac will do anything for fame, fortune and glory. Even if it means selling his closest friends out. When not being a pompous poster boy, he's quite a buffoon when it comes to action. Hence why Delta hates being his sidekick.

Lord Dominous - An evil masked space warlord who is out on a quest for (What else?) Universal conquest. His hobbies include torturing the innocent, laughing maniacally, and power walking through his impenetrable fortress.
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TheDogwhitaTail Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Pretty good! ^^
Zigwolf Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
After reading about all of these characters, I'm really starting to like this alot more
The-Man-Of-Tomorrow Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Neat little concept. It should air on late-night on Disney (mainly due to a certain character's name XD), as it would balance out the void between serious and surreal, which I previously tackled in my latest journal entry.

BBAngel17 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
This reminds me of Toonstruck, but different. I like Toonstruck. Very interesting story you have.
BreakoutKid Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, it's kinda like Toonstruck. It's also got a little TUFF Puppy influence (Due to the protagonist Delta starting off as the sidekick to an idiot hero) with a hint of The Mighty Duck Film series (Since the co-star human character, Artie helps Delta and her group break the glass ceiling and become heroes).
BBAngel17 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
Very interesting and Happy Valentine's Day!
shinragod Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014
Ok not bad so far. This sets the stage for the main cast.
Wonder why Dominus's font is so small though. X-3
DARKZADARPRIME Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
nice for story ideas i suggest very old sci fi b movies and some of the flash gordon and buck rodgers movie serials along with early sci fi  television series
Dmx4ever Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014
Sounds Good :D
bigfootRULES Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Student Writer
you should add more backstory detail to the characters like for example, captain dumass accidentally disfigured lord dominous's face somehow in a brutal yet hilarious way. (like acid or something)
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